Faerie Fyre
New Student
I give you the gift of Fairy size, uh, SIGHT!
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Jun 21, 2009 3:05:56 GMT
Post by Faerie Fyre on Jun 21, 2009 3:05:56 GMT
| She remembered a time of happiness. She remembered a time when she had been well cared for, and loved, and played with.
She remembered being HIS favorite, the one permitted outside of her Pokeball to accompany him. She remembered being protected, and protecting herself.
Then they came. HE had fought them, cycling through HIS entire party, even enlisted her help in trying to beat them.
HE had been good to them, and they all fought valiantly for him. But in the end, they won. They stole all of his Pokeballs, except for hers. She had hidden herself, and knew the truth.
She was alone, lonely and frightened. Since watching her trainer be viciously beaten because he had stood between bad guys and their prize, she had been by herself.
She languished after her trainer, missing him and missing her team mates like a part of her had died.
Another trainer had tried to capture her, but she had refused to be caught. The trainer had asked her if she wanted to go to a place that would take care of her for a while, heal her.
She had gone, and the people had healed her. They had fed her, and they had kept her safe. But they could not exercise her, and could not mend her broken heart.
She was alone
Amber had been watching the little Misdreavous ever since she had arrived. Not so much unfriendly as frightened, or maybe shy.
One of the other agency workers had told her that Missy had been brought in pretty battered, but no one knew why. The resident Rapidash-morph, Erik, knew only that she had a broken heart, and no energy.
At night, after hugging each of the other Pokemon to say good night, Amber often watched Missy hover miserably. She had offered the little Pokemon a hug several times, but each time, Missy had moved away.
Some Pokemon couldn't be helped. |
Three drabbles (one hundred words, exactly) about an abandoned Misdreavous. How'd you like it?
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Jun 21, 2009 4:07:09 GMT
Post by Birdybot on Jun 21, 2009 4:07:09 GMT
Aw.... that's so sad!
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Faerie Fyre
New Student
I give you the gift of Fairy size, uh, SIGHT!
Posts: 31
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Jun 21, 2009 6:59:40 GMT
Post by Faerie Fyre on Jun 21, 2009 6:59:40 GMT
Yeah, I have no clue where that came from. Random inspiration, because I've always wanted to write a story about a trainer whose main Pokemon was a playful Misdreavous. Then I got the idea of what if her trainer was taken from her?
*goes to fix random typos*
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Jun 21, 2009 8:16:41 GMT
Post by Angel on Jun 21, 2009 8:16:41 GMT
Aww....Poor likkle Misdreavus....I think it's very good - well done Faerie. I will make this Pokemon one of the ones up for adoption once I have accepted 4 others - because I was going to have 5 Pokemon (made by the members) going into Home Sweet Home. But they can't all be frmo the same person. . But Missy will definately be one of them. EDIT: I will accept a certain number of Pokemon and from them I will then put up a poll where 5 will be chosen by everyone through the voting system. This means I'll have about 8 entries and then 5 will be chosen through the voting. So Missy will be one of them. XD. 7 more to go.
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Jun 21, 2009 10:22:15 GMT
Post by Birdybot on Jun 21, 2009 10:22:15 GMT
Ooooh! -raises hand- Are we allowed to Adopt the Pokémon we create? Cos it might not be fair if we could just randomly make Pokémon as we want, then have them. Unless that was in a Giveaway.
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Jun 21, 2009 11:04:54 GMT
Post by Angel on Jun 21, 2009 11:04:54 GMT
You are allowed to adopt th ones you create but once I have the 5 it will be first come first serve. So you won't autmoatically get it before anyone else - plus there are prices for each Pokemon, so it depends if you ask for it first and are able to pay the right amount. So it isn't automatically going to be your own Pokemon but there is a slim chance it might be. But I don't think it's right to create Pokemon that just you yourself want.
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Jun 22, 2009 20:50:58 GMT
Post by kittiepie on Jun 22, 2009 20:50:58 GMT
Aww, the poor thing. I feel sorry for it...
By the way, they are awesome! I wish I had Pwnsome writing skillz.
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